November 01, 2005

b1-66er's first punch

Task 1: Write an alliterative haiku using only words that start with vowels.

any antidote
added admonishingly
attracts attention



Task 2: Yoko Ono is the subject for your second haiku.

yoko walks through grass
beetles scatter at her feet
that's the second time

2 Comments:

Blogger e.a. said...

kudos for even sticking to a single vowel. absolutely amazing!

Tuesday, November 01, 2005 1:25:00 AM  
Blogger b1-66er said...

ah. you're right. i wrote it driving into work and then used the gerund.

i'm changin' it. doesn't make it "right," though.

Tuesday, November 01, 2005 1:04:00 PM  

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